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May 25, 2013

I really meant to tell you

Really couldn’t years ago

Even when the barstool flew

I said I loved you

What I didn’t tell you then

I must say now,

I hate you.

 

Trifextra: Week Sixty-nine

On now to our weekend challenge.  This weekend we are asking for a thirty-three word confession.

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22 Comments leave one →
  1. May 25, 2013 11:57 am

    Something tells me that the bar stool would have hurt less on contact. You packed a lot of emotion into just a few words. Nicely done.

  2. May 25, 2013 3:16 pm

    I agree with K. Impactful scene in just a few words.

  3. May 25, 2013 4:18 pm

    good take on the prompt

  4. May 25, 2013 4:33 pm

    the bar stool surely did less damage – to them both

  5. May 25, 2013 5:24 pm

    Thanks barbara and Triumphant!

  6. Draug419 permalink
    May 25, 2013 7:46 pm

    That’s a powerful confession.

  7. May 26, 2013 12:11 am

    Love and hate – both passionate responses but at opposite ends of the spectrum. I agree with the comment that the barstool would’ve hurt less than this confession!

  8. May 26, 2013 12:21 pm

    Interesting and intense.

  9. May 26, 2013 2:21 pm

    Love it! I can relate. Nice job!

  10. May 26, 2013 3:53 pm

    that was a strong scene in a few words.

  11. May 26, 2013 5:06 pm

    Great intense story.

  12. May 26, 2013 6:25 pm

    That would feel great to say, if it needed to be said. Powerful. Remember to head back to vote. Polls are open.

  13. May 27, 2013 5:31 am

    The truth is often better told. Good writing.

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