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Catch a Drop

August 17, 2012

Easing down the slippery slope

Preparing for a fall

I take the leap, a catcher surprises me

His willingness most of all

The spins and twists I follow

All on account of him

There must be something

May be nothing

Perhaps it’s all just whim.

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2 Comments leave one →
  1. August 17, 2012 8:40 pm

    I really like this one. it works on several levels for me and like really good writing, lends itself to my own interpretations of meaning. Also, It’s very difficult for most writers to carry a rhyme scheme that doesn’t seem clumsy and this absolutely does not.

    • August 17, 2012 9:47 pm

      Wow. thank you. I appreciate your feedback. Not many comment so yours are a welcome rain.

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